Thursday 20 October 2011

F E E D B A C K

School Magazine Peer Feedback
Nicole has answered some questions and supplied feedback for my school magazine first draft


Are the fonts readable? Are there a maximum of 3 fonts? Have they used a different font for their masthead and their coverlines?

On Jessie’s cover all her fonts are readable but I don’t think she has used 3 different fonts however, her entire cover is good and she really captures the reader’s eye as her cover lines are interesting and appealing to audiences. 
Is there a clear colour scheme? Is there a sense of branding / House style
There is a colour scheme of white throughout the cover which gives it a sense of branding which is a good thing because her magazine will be different to anything else we have seen.
Is the eye flow natural?
I think there is not an eye flow because she uses the whole cover to write on but it is a very good cover as she does capture the reader’s eye. 
Is the picture believable/well edited?
Yes, this is because I liked how the model reaches out both hands and the writing above it makes it believable. Also, the model does look like a real student which adds realism to the cover.
Is Spelling Punctuation and Grammar accurate-Are there any typo’s?
No there are not any misspellings on the cover.
Are coverlines lined up?
All cover lines are lined up with each other.

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